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Tuesday, June 2, 2020
Hello and Goodbye poem
Today we wrote a hello and Goodbye poem on google slides.
Hi, Olivia. I really enjoyed reading your 'Hello, Goodbye' poem. You have chosen some great vocabulary to share your message and to create a picture for your reader. I think a few of us might be missing those sleep ins that you talked about. What did you enjoy watching on Netflix?
Hi Olivia, I thought that your poem was really cool to read. I will also will miss those home made baking treats that I engoyed juring lockdown. Great work.
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Hi, Olivia. I really enjoyed reading your 'Hello, Goodbye' poem. You have chosen some great vocabulary to share your message and to create a picture for your reader. I think a few of us might be missing those sleep ins that you talked about. What did you enjoy watching on Netflix?
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia, I thought that your poem was really cool to read. I will also will miss those home made baking treats that I engoyed juring lockdown. Great work.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sierra for the awesome feedback! :) What else will you miss from lockdown?
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